Friday, 17 April 2020

my poem



Jesus is our savior
Easter is when he came back from the dead
Sins are forgiven because of you
United we stand
Son of God we love you

1 comment:

  1. Hi Declan, great idea using JESUS for your acrostic poem. The way you have written sentences for your poem is really effective, well done. Next time you use a Google Document copy and paste the contents to Blogger instead of embedding it, as it doesn't seem to work the best. Ka pai, Miss Hickling.

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