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Morena Declan, you have used a great range of shapes to design your person, ka pai. Next time it would be even better if you could add more detail to your description and think about what time of year the story was set. Was it warm or cold in the text? What time of year do you think it could have been? Ma te wa, Miss Hickling.
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Morena Declan, you have used a great range of shapes to design your person, ka pai. Next time it would be even better if you could add more detail to your description and think about what time of year the story was set. Was it warm or cold in the text? What time of year do you think it could have been? Ma te wa, Miss Hickling.
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